Wednesday 22 October 2014

Slightly More Detailed Shot Narrative for the Narrative Portion of the Piece

1. Main Character is moving around his home

2. The Main Character starts to boil a kettle, he moves to another room, he stops and looks at a war cabinet - Distracted by the war cabinet, the hiss of the kettle disturbs him and gives him a quick flashback of a gunshot.

3. The Character runs from his home, while the camera holds the shot of the boiling kettle.

4. Clad in winter wear, the character moves through a busy town street, trying to keep to himself. People bump into startling him, a shot from the front and back indicate the forcible collision

5. After being shoved around enough the main character grabs someone's wrist harshly, then, realizing his mistake, he runs away in shame to a nearby alleyway.

6. Questionable scene: Inclusion of a flashback centered around seeing a homeless man in the alleyway. (Scene is questionable due to needing to find actors willing to appear homeless)

7. Main Character runs a long distance indicated by a currently unspecified passage of time effect.

8. Main Character has yet another flashback which finally inspires him to return home

9. Once he makes it home he gathers up all of his war materials and memorabilia. He then proceeds to burn the items one by one, eventually leading to a dramatic burning of his uniform.

10. The song comes to a close with a scene of the main character destroying a cabinet full of war medals.

This acts as a basic narrative for my story to follow, by using this I can keep my planning concise in order to keep myself from wavering into new concepts and ideas too much, although minor on set alterations are still highly welcomed.

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